I just want to start off by saying that I love this game. It's thoughtful, meaningful, and it puts me in a really good mood, which is really one of the goals of any fun game right?
I have an idea for an alternate ending of the game. You should make "Death" attempt to convince the player to commit suicide and have the player retaliate against him. After saving people's lives, shouldn't you try to save your own? Everybody has some kind of sadness within their lives but we're all fighting back and can really relate to it.
Thanks again for this great game and I hope you can make even more.