pretty cool game
Reviews for "MrPinkuGame: LPI"
Very nice man. I love the story line, can't wait to read the rest. Are you using AS2 or 3 for your coding? This must have took a lot of animation work. My hat is off to you sir.
How to skip the paint scene: click with the right mouse on the screen and click on play with the "right" button and again... etc.
The game was interesting, and funny. An intriguing storyline so far.
The text in the characters page, and at the very beginning is a little hard to read, which is off-putting for when you're just starting the game. I think a different font choice would help a lot.
After I clicked on "cheats" from the first page I couldn't figure out a way to get back, and had to refresh. It'd be nice if there was a back button here.
I also noticed quite a few typos, which really makes any game feel a lot less professional. Make sure to read through, proofread, and spell check all the text. A few that I caught:
On the first page after you click play it says "so we installed ours teepees..." It should be "our" not "ours."
When Alfy says "I don't know why I allways spend my time..." it should be "always" not "allways."
And when he says "Zouss has 2 pair of pants" it should be "pairs" not "pair."
"The stones location is a secret" should be "The stone's location is a secret."
Sometimes you didn't capitalize Indians and other times you did. It should always be capitalized.
Another note when you click on "Kick her off!" or "She can be a good hostage?" you get a page that says it's the "only" bad ending, yet there are more than one. It shouldn't say it's the only one, if that's the case.
I hope some of my suggestions helped!
To pass the body painting scene, click every color/option at least once. Eventually, it will progress to the next scene. I started at the top left and went down, counter-clockwise. Hope this helps! It's only a Beta, but there's a nice story behind it all, with lots more scenes to come!