i find it pretty hard to identify with someone running away from monsters that don't even do any harm (at least if you don't touch them), it would be much scarier if they'd run after you. quote averrath: "Like games like Amnesia and Slenderman are scary because the moment i see a monster there it means i'm at a huge risk and run for my life while here it's just.
"Meh, it's there."
apart from that, i love the graphics and the music. just try to focus a little more on the horror aspect; this is more a puzzle than anything else.