When I saw this on the front page my mind was drawn to the PleaseDiePie video a few weeks back and was expecting a similar style of video mocking PewDiePie but after watching this and having read the comment below ( rockluver 001's comment) and your response I feel justified to give you high marks I awarded. I'm going brake down my opinions so that it's easier to read:
Art: The art was bright and colourful and it was obvious you had taken the time to draw the character models with care and to really personify the facial expressions thus helping to make the joke funnier. The style of the art I would say was appropriate for context and the only real improvement I can think of is a bit more detail in the clothing. 9/10
Animation: The animation itself was rather decent and I thought the talking animations where the highlights due to the effort to correctly lip sink the people to the words however if I'm honest the biggest flaw with your video and with the animation was the lack of movement sometimes but once again I need to point out the flaws despite how small or slight so that next time you know what to look at and you never know it might be perfect next time. 8/10
Voices: The voice acting was another strong point for this as it was clear and the tones and accents varied enough to help create and sustain the idea of multiple fans not just the same male American voice.I honestly feel there's not much more to say about this and hope the voice quality remains at this standard. 10/10
Enjoyment: The real reason you made the video. Right? Well if it was mission achieved. The slightly obsessive nature of his fans is something I personally know as one of my best friends is a Pewdiephile and the first point about finding the same video funnier just because a grown man screamed and cried and not being able to tell the difference is something I see with him so this made me laugh at personal level. Despite the few points made above I found none of them made any difference to my enjoyment of the video. 10/10
Keep up the good work my friend and I look forward to your next video :D.