Reviews for "Arachnotorious - Ep 1"

Well that was hilarious. Great concept, btw.

That's fucking hilarious!

I remember you back in the day, along with Andrew Dickman, Iragination, Clark Lybeck, etc. and this proves that you can still make top notch content. Truth be told, you missed out on a lot of great stuff (CI: Unregulated, Contra Rampage, Dual Arms Verbatim, and Gunchest to name a few) since you left, but let's not get sentimental and nostalgic.

When it comes to the animation, it really shows how much you have improved since your early drawn efforts (The Kirby Matrix). You have nice layouts, along with well-done frame-by-frame and tweening. Oh, and I like the style you used in this. Then there's the sound, which is also excellent. The voice acting is great considering that you did it yourself, and the music used fit perfectly. It really shows that you have the ear of a director as well as the eye. Finally, the content was pretty funny considering how short it was. Aside from being original, the execution was magnificent unlike some people who became popular out of luck. The only problem with this is no preloader or replay button. A bad influence from being on YouTube for far too long. If you still have the .fla, I suggest that you add those when you get the chance.

What's good:
-Well animated
-Reasonable file size

What's Bad
-No Preloader or replay button

Overall: Bill, how would you like a nine from a fellow old-time user? (4.5/5)

What have we here?
Straight away, I love the concept. Fantastic concept.

Nothing too special or eye-catching(unless you're like me and adore spiders).
The art is on-par and not painful, as is the animating, which was pretty neatly done. The audio is light an amusing, which fits well with the animation as a whole.

One bother, however, was that there was a very clear difference between the background art and the animated art.
Whilst neither were bad, the two styles did conflict and were very detached from each other. This made it seem like the animation was just pasted over a stock image.

Another issue was that when using the Newgrounds' stretch screen function, the animation was very pixellated. I don't know if this is just the way the function works, or if it is because the animation was done at too small of a size. I am unfamiliar with how this all works.
If it is because of animation/image sizes, I suggest making the art at a higher size/resolution.

Oh, and a replay button would be awesome. :3

Aside from that, all-in-all this was amusing and a great start to what I hope is just Episode 1 of many.

P.S. The final image made me laugh quite loudly. I love it.

DragoonFenix15 responds:

That's an interesting criticism about the backgrounds not matching the foreground. For me, that was intentional because I wanted the characters to stand out from the background. But in a good way, not a bad way :) I tend not to like doing backgrounds in Flash (I do mine in Photoshop, then import to Flash) - the vectory Flash look comes off as cheap to me unless a bunch of texture is scribbled on, but then it becomes busy and distracting.

Thanks for taking the time to write such direct comments!

Funny parody of all those nature documentary people. But if he is covered in poisonous spiders how will there be a second episode I wonder? Thanks for the nice animation I liked it a lot.!

I happen to be a fan of yours from all those years ago. It's great, because I am ALWAYS looking at old people returning to the website. It's kind of sad, because I do like the sprite flashes more. There just aren't many of them nowadays. I think sim-man still has the record for longest time between submitting something. The animation was of course good.

It was interesting to see you take on something completely different. The image at the end with the spider leg is pretty funny too. I have graduated High School and am still in college. The voice came off as pretty funny. I guess insects eating people alive are cool like that.