Too many near-rhymes for my taste. I like for things to either rhyme or not rhyme, this is in between! lol. But I still enjoyed it. I love poetry and its always refreshing to see some wholesome/positive stuff being submitted here. Hope this makes it :)
Reviews for "Your Heart's Door"
This flash is really simple yet it is so meaningful.If everyone not only understands what peace and love are but also practises acts of kindness,the world would surely be a more harmonious home for everyone.The voicework is clear and at a suitable reading speed,the animation is pretty good for a first try and the music suits the flash perfectly and the message is easy to understand,so good work and hope to see more from you soon.
cute!
Appreciate the creativity and the effort... but it's a little cliche. the media already pumps this feel good stuff out and its not well received. otherwise, everyone would already be handing out hearts and smiling and there'd be no suicide. But alas, reality creeps in and apathy remains. Keep on keepin on.