It's impossible to tell if this is gonna be much of a good game from the prologue. What's your core mechanic? What's new or interesting about this game that will make people want to play it? To begin with, why do you even need money to make such a simple game? (And yes, I know exactly how hard it is to make a game).
Kudos for not having trite scares like something jumping out of nowhere and screaming, but so far your game looks and feels boring. Good luck anyway.