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You get a star for the two above, but that's about it. The animation quality is very low, and the story is quite weak. Your sound is effects are good though. Why don't you try to clean up the animation a bit, work on fleshing out a more complete story and try again? If you did that, this could be a much higher quality movie. Also, you need to change the rating on this movie. You have two characters in this movie who show nudity, and the rating of the short needs to reflect that.