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Reviews for "J&J: Sweet and Sour"

Seems quiet good work, script and voice acting either :) 5 stars! Btw i can't wait to see "The Door" series.

This was really good. Great voicework and animation.

THAT was impressive. By far one of best animations you have produced so far.

The acting was top notch! The lead characters voice reminded me of snake or spike from cowboy bebop :D

The animation was very smooth and had excellent flow. The walk cycles in particular had a great bounce and sense of life. I also really like the style of the linework, it certainly distinguishes you from the crowd.

However, I still think that the background could use a little work and you need to be a bit more careful about your execution of close ups. It seems that, because you aren't using vector lines like in flash, the close cuts have a very noticeable drop in quality. Maybe in future you'd be better off redrawing the close up shots rather than enlarging (or zooming into) a previous mid shot, if that is in fact the case.
Though I can understand if you did that to save time due to the deadline of the competition ;p

Also I feel, though this is only my opinion, that the colour palette could have been a bit bolder. More contrasting colours, deeper blacks etc would have made the 'Film Noir' atmosphere 'pop' just a little bit more. But that is no real fault on your part since it is only my personal, directional preference.

Anyway, keep it up! and hold on to that voice cast! ( really professional ;p )
I'm looking forward to what you come out with next!

Maaaaan, this came out so amazing! To everyone else in the cast, you guys were so good :'D Really lovely performances from all of you from beginning to end! And Hikarian, you animation was so darned good! Seriously, the expressions, the lipsync... all was top-notch! The writing and mixing weren't quite as good as the rest of the package, but that's the only thing keeping this from being a solid 5/5.

I'd love to work more with all of you someday!

Excellent voice acting, and charming art style! Not a very developed story, but hey, not bad for two minutes! I'd like to have seen some extra personality traits that would have made the characters more memorable, but overall, excellent job!