well this was interesting. but by it not being a real video more of an ad for a game i can't give this a good rate saying "hey nice job on the video it looks great!" im sorry i just feel like i can't. personaly i feel this would go better if you upoaded a demo of the game. but thats just me.
i wish the best for you and your game and hope it brings you much success.
sorry for the bad rate.