This is awesome! So epic for a first flash!
Reviews for "First Flash "
Seriously? You look like your a veteran to flashes Thats how Awesome tht was
Great for you're first!! Make more now!!
Smoother animation would be nice but other than that this is pretty good.
ZeroIsDivided responds:
Yeah, the animation is one thing I need to work on. Thank you for the feedback! <3
This is incredible for your first flash! Your choreography was well made, and animation was overall smooth. Nice choice of music, too. You may want to do something different with your font if it's not going to be the standard "subtitle" format; having the black box behind your white text makes it look somewhat out of place. There are a lot of creative ways to apply written dialogue that isn't at the screen's base. I also noticed some scenes were missing backgrounds. The Deadpool-fanboy-scream, while humorous, was a strange place to end it.
You have a lot of potential, I'll watch for more of your content. 7 / 10