Reviews for "Epexsus Episode 1"

I dont like it you copied naruto's story

i found myself extreramly bored off the bat. I saw more fade out and fade in transitions than i saw anmation for the first min or so. too many stills in the intro, not enough movement. the story was relative boring to be honest. As said by the previous comment, that story has been used too much. Its less origional than body switchers ing with some one. i fealt like i knew everthing about it before the intro was over. I was right to assume so, although a decent story in itself, there was nothing too great about it that i couldnt find from any standard anime.

Ugh... sorry though I appreciate the effort in animatin, things look out of place, the characters look to cutesey to take seriously, everyone looks the same, all the men have the same black hair, no detail in thier bodies to derive them differently, everyones like... anime girly guy skinny...

The story is like Naruto-hungergames and jason put together... A world torn apart by violence where they hunt in a modern society- hunger games. People putting themselves into different tribes that have wierd symbols drawn for each one that related tothe name- naruto. Man in the mask who wants to kill the main character- jason.

Seeing as naruto is a very popular anime in the US and Japan, and Hungergames the movie was such abig thing I can see why it would influence yo without noticing, but still that is all I see in this. A for effort, D and F for everything else. It also seems to start like a generic anime where the hero wakes up from anightmare and is greeted by some hot girl he probably gets with later on or will have a pointless love triangle. The creatures are uncreative, wolevs with several eyes, big devil vreature... i see no originality. Every chaarcter had a marking on its face in some way that makes me thing of kiba or soemthing form naruto...

I think you should re do this, free itself of atleast some of the naruto and hungergames elements, re-stylize your work and give epople definition and better hair styles so not everyones alike, and th emost important thing about this I dislike...

Some scenes skip into the next fast and with no reason, you went form masked murder, to boy runnign and getting knocked out, to a ecplanation to the world, to a nightmare to a boy waking up meeting his friend and seeing another friend be yelled at, to the amsked man stalking them in about 5 minutes. Nothing transitioned well, nothing gave reason towhy this or that happened, he fell and was knocke dout, howd he get home? why a sudden transition to the masked man then him and the girl talking? Its sloppy writing... sorry try again. I cant believe this made it on top list... Seems no one cares if someone rips off many media ideas at once to appeal to an audience.

Awsome, love the character build ups. Reminds me of Avatar: The last airbender.

Cant wait to see the next one, im gonna keep going on newgrounds for this.