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Reviews for "BDSM Dungeon Monitor"

good game more tools would be great

What's with the "Play game" button, i can't play this game.

its making me really wet...

Its a good game worth playing I enjoyed it.

The art was great I feel like the hair could be more realistic, but I know that can be a real pain so no points lost there.

First and foremost is the fact that the BDSM elements in the game are very minor. The whip is there but you don't even need to use it, she may be tied to the wall but all your doing is pleasing her. There is no sense that your punishing or controlling her. She should squirm a little There should be equal parts pain and pleasure involved. The whole point of BDSM is that the line between the two becomes blurred.

Second, I would've like there to be some sort of narrative. There's a give and take that comes from a this kind of relationship. she gets whipped for misbehaving and pleasure for doing what shes told. A narrative would help give the characters motivation. Have her misbehave and give them a reason to whip her.

Third is the fact that her body doesn't react to the whip, Not even a little. Whats the point of the whip if you don't get the feeling of power that comes from knowing she's forced to take the pain you're giving her. she should have more then one facial expression and it should change depending on whether your pleasing or punishing her. same for the sounds she makes. having the same one for everything is very repetitive and sucks the fun out of using the whip.

Fourth is the fact that I never really felt like she was getting off. Don't misunderstand, the sounds she made were great but i think she should have gotten off before sex happened and it didn't sound like she ever reached orgasm. It's all about the sub, your pleasure is secondary to making sure the sub is properly trained and properly rewarded for behaving. That means getting her to climax for doing what she's told sex is your reward for doing that and should only happen after. A lot of effort should go into making sure the player gets the sense that she's really getting off.

Last is the music. It's decent, certainly better then a lot of other submissions but there's room for improvement, it feels a bit repetitive. But like i said it's not bad. Liked the voice acting for the female but it should sound muffled when there is a ball gag in her mouth. Also why was there no voice acting for the male?

Although there is a lot of room for improvement, it was a great game. You have a solid start here but it fells like half a game.But I really did enjoy playing it. The voice acting for the woman was great. Overall a really good job.

mz87 responds:

thanks for your comments and suggestions .. :)

Aw... nice game, i want more of thouse from you, because you can really make this kind of games. :D