that would make a pretty good 3 part series or a movie... the brother coming back from the stars and releasing discord and teaming with the changelings, to fight against luna, Celestia and all the elements of harmony...
there would have to be explosions and a number of emergency pinky supplies stashes all over the place, and the magic...
shit would be wild with magic...
What we hand in mind exactly, although a different way things would play out here and there. And if its MLP, you gotta know itdll have Pinkie and magic.
love the animation and art style very smooth, (in a rough flash way).
Not a hard plot to follow story, could put more enthusiasm into the narration though.
Other than that definitely worth watching.
Yeah, flash macromedia is a pretty older version compared to these Cs5's and whatnot, but we seem to like it. Story was meant for people to try to peice together, which we do see ppl doing, and the narration, well, not many of us have "the voice" but hey, best what we can do ^^. Thanks for the comment and crit.
I thought that the animation was very good! It went very smoothly, and everything fit together nicely. The music fit and I enjoyed the story! A very interesting concept. Maybe making a second part explaining the Elements of 'Disharmony' I think it was? I couldn't understand the narrator at some parts very well. Maybe enunciate your words better. Anyway, a great job and a great flash~
Thank you very much, glad to know people actually enjoyed this fan fic. The animation and art was the basis of what we wanted to show. The story was what we wanted to get across, something different. I knew it, we should have highered Morgan Freeman narrate it. Thanks alot, this crit. helps us do better towards our next animation.
Mlp, something new learned every day :) Great Job!!