okay i will be honest in how i usually see games i like made , this game i beat in about 30 seconds, sure you can have only three items for your father, but try to make it to where you have to do 10 or 15 thngs just to get that one item, and the main characters face, dont make it so long, try to make it a little more realistic, or state that you are watching from the fathers point of view,