Okay for a first attempt at voice recording and script writing. The voices needed to be louder and have more expression. The script felt dull, such as the main bat's logic was weak and the other bats just made obvious statements. I aware that this is probably just practice, but next time make the story longer so the viewer gets more into it.
Reviews for "Crazed Bat People"
falling responds:
Well hold on a sec, a apreciate the tips, but if it was quiet then you could turn it up... And I don't understand the problem with logic? The fact that he didn't know how all the other bats felt was part of the joke. And the obvious statements? The situation would usually consist of ravenous demonic creatures devouring humans, but the irony lied in how un obvious it ended up being, that they were actually uninterested in the cliche. I will work on making longer toons in the future though, thats something I've been told.