Amazing! Good story, and the japanese style is great! =D
Reviews for "The Monster"
exninja123 responds:
Hehe, thanks! xD
Great plot and art work, and use of music to set the tone.... I'm a fast reader so I was able to keep up but I would either reduce the amount of words per frame or extend the time for reading... as others may not be that quick.
exninja123 responds:
Thank you! :)
Amazing, the music, the story. The animation was simple but that a kind so i don't take care of that. The music totally fit with your video. No voice but adding voice will ruin a bit of the drama so everything find in this side. The story was basic but not boring and he was enough long to have the content that story need to be good. Only two little thing need to be mention. The first is the text is a little bit to speedy. Sometime I don't have the time to read all the text but I am a very slow reader so that can be just me. The second are red screen. When she get attack, the screen his all red the background and the character, personally, I didn't like it. I think that broke the beauty of the draw. Try to only put int he background. Once again is my point of view.
This video was amazing. I very impatience to see the next one.
exninja123 responds:
thanks for the critique and thoughtful review! :)
more will come soon!~
Amazing storytelling. I'm keeping my eyes on this.
exninja123 responds:
Thank you!!! :)