very good.
Reviews for "The Butler's Bitch (DEMO"
AKABUR responds:
He-he. Thanks mate.
very nice game, good graphics and i like the text and a lot of the other parts of the game. Though there should be a return option to try other options. and maybe some challenge to subdue her. I'm expecting more
I personally find this pretty nice: good artwork, no bugs, the short storyline is a good adition, although it is very dull and uninteresting (some jokes and maybe puns could help). cant wait for the completed version. the only let down is the lenght. but i know you are going to work in it so no problem there.
no violations of the rules, btw
Good job! (LOL)
AKABUR responds:
Thanks... This is a first time I did something that ambitious... Story-line and everything... I still don't have enough experience in FLASH to create something "FREAKING AWESOME", but I am getting there, little by little :) This flash took me a very long time, and although there are so many thing I think need improving I just can't work on in any longer... All I can do is star working on something new and make sure my next FLASH game surpass the previous one ... :) Thank you for your support by the way :)
Nice, but it's a pity that Hentai United won't let you upload the complete game.
It's been a while since you submitted a flash, and while it's just a demo; this is well done. Truth is, I don't think hentai deserves the hate it gets considering the existence of Stag Films and Tijuana Bibles.
Graphics: I really enjoy your style, which is a breath of fresh air when compared with the numerous anime/madness/John K imitators. While the animation is decent, there isn't much of it aside from the sex scenes. Plus, the pictures would have looked better if you inked & colored them in flash considering that they jpeg artifacts.
Sound: The music and sound fit for this demo, which is good. However, I suggest that you use the audio portal for music next time.
Content: You had quite a bit of content for a demo such as this. I may not be a fan of Tomb Raider, it's great to see underused subjects get some recognition on here. However, aside from being a demo, the filesize is quite big for something like that. Of course, I really liked what you had so far, and would like to check out the version on HU, but am not a fan of having to pay every month along with a dislike for credit cards.
What's Good:
-Good graphics
-Fitting music and sound
-Underused subject
-Decent ammount of content for a demo
What's Bad:
-The fact that it's a demo
-Would have been better suited for the games section
-The file seems to be a bit big for a demo.
Overall: I'm giving you an eight, Akabur/Rubaka. (4/5)
AKABUR responds:
Thank you for a very detailed review... Yeah... I am still not very experienced when it's about creating FLASH animations... But I am proving ... little by little ;) I will definitely use your suggestions in my next projects. Thank you.
I didn't understand at all the "video". And it is really short