Needs a preloader. It just seems like some parts were better animated then others. Like the battle with Redonic and the void soldiers was cool, but the first battle with tytrun and alastor was poorly done. And why does alastor's sprites look like you forgot to set the trace bitmap to pixels? Also, try to optimize your audio, because I don't think this should be 15 mbs. One last thing, don't overuse narration text, try to integrate what's happening into the dialogue of the characters. Okay, I'm done.