Really loved how detailed this was. Like someone mentioned before, I'm not a whole fan of the anthropomorphism, but I can appreciate the work you put into this. The story was also simple to understand to those who were confused by the ending.
===POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT===
You only have a small piece of the story and it's from the Bounty Hunter's perspective. LenZ might actually have been wrongly accused of whatever he's wanted for. As you can see throughout the video, he never laid a foul hand on Kyu and he had the chance. He had no weapons on him as well. It makes sense that he saved her if he wasn't actually a criminal.