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Reviews for "Entropy"

first it looked like a good and interesting idea but then i saw the whole video and thought i got betrayed.

This is probably the worst thing I've seen on newgrounds. All of a sudden the boy just shows up in this world without any explanation at all, and he looks like an idiot with his mouth in an "O" formation. When he finds the stone he just starts rubbing it for no reason I can see, and from what I can tell he was a lot farther away from the tree from what I saw before, so how did he see the stone. Then all of a sudden the world is thrown into chaos, again for no reason that I see, he drops the stone sees that the world stops and picks up the stone again, once again for no reason. Then he throws the stone in the air it splits in two, then somehow it saves the world? How did he know it would do that? How does that save the world? I'm assuming it does because it ends without any warning and the description says that he saves the world. Don't even get me started on the artwork. My God, the artwork was atrocious, and there were so many inconsistencies. Without any dialogue or text, we get absolutely no context as to what's going on. This was obviously rushed. I can tell you're new here because I see you've responded to most of the comments, but don't let that stop you from replying to mine because I want to hear your opinion. I wanted to see something good out of this. That's why I gave you the star, because the idea was really interesting. So, next time, please don't rush things and take your time. The reason why the other artists on newgrounds are so admired is because they take their time with there work to perfect it. I really hope this review helps you and your internet career.

SwedishPlumTrees responds:

Your right. I will respond to you. But not for the reason you'd like. I am going to tell you that I tried on this. I did, and if you didn't like the finished result, well, your loss.. Also, your lack of logic is...wierd. You say it's obvious I'm "quite new," because I answer reviews (and you claim my video doesn't contain logic?) I answer reviews because I like to see what people think of my work and how I can make it better. Indeed, you made suggestions, but not without being nasty about it. Okay, I'm not the best artist in the world, but hey, I tried my best. I'm sorry you didn't like it.

I liked the style and the Dan-O music, but then after the time stop thing ended and there was a new song, it suddenly ended. What's up with that? work on your storytelling, and please create more stuff like this!

SwedishPlumTrees responds:

Thanks for the review. Yeah, more was supposed to happen, but I ended it because I was afraid I wouldn't finish it in time for NATA. But thank you for the support. =)

eu aodrei

SwedishPlumTrees responds:

Not sure what that means, but thank you for the review. =)

That was OK. the story interesting and nice but the animation is bad. when you see the hand drops that purple thing you can see that the hand is not attached to anything.
Make another one maybe as a continue to that with better animation and I'm sure you will get more stars :)

SwedishPlumTrees responds:

Thanks =). Yeah, I realized that after I submitted. Will work harder next time!