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Reviews for "Made In China"
lol wut? I think I'm very confused...
Well, this is something I would never expected to have come out of Newgrounds.
I can tell there's a lot of thought put into this, and don't get me wrong, I thought it was wonderful. But there are a few things that may need improvement:
~The animation was a bit rigid in places, mainly on the humans. That needs a bit of work.
~This might be going against your original vision, but a VERY slight use of colour in a few places might really make something like this a bit more interesting. Not tons of colour everywhere, just minimalistic uses here and there.
There was a lot I liked about this, though. The wine glass exploding? Awesome! That one shot with the fish-eye lens? Didn't know you could even do that in Flash! Those recreations of all those famous paintings? Pretty intriguing, and you captured the essence of them very well, making them fit in with the rest of the flash quite flawlessly.
So yeah, it's pretty damn good but it needs work. There's a lot of potential here.
peef2 responds:
thanks for your response. i am always trying out new animation and trying to learn. hopefully my next one will be better
Hey alright.
I actually liked this, contray to most others it seems.
I think I got the message, or at least, made one up out of the images shown to me. Music was neat, adding a nice dramatic effect.
Obviously not intending to be the most graphically superior flash, I believe the charm lies in what you make of the plot.
Good work, I enjoyed it.
A clusterfuck of random scenes. Tries too hard to give the impression that it is relaying a message which obviously isn't there, with various flashing images and an eerie atmosphere. This will get a lot of the younger members of this site to think "Wow, this is DEEP!" but any person who has seen flash animations for a few years is going to call bullshit on this, as this has been done way too many times by now.
That aside, the animation was fantastic and it actually had me watching all the way through. Furthermore you did a fantastic job at setting the atmosphere using quite simple means. I am giving you a 3.5/5 for an animation that is close to perfection, but offers no real content of any kind.