I don't know who wrote this or if it's based on some official manga, but I stopped watching when they got to the "Multiverse Tournament" part. It's a boring and lame idea for a plot. I mean, I know it's DBZ and tournaments are popular in the series. But the "Let's gather fighters from different dimensions and pit the against each other" is a little too unoriginal for my tastes. That and the whole "I'll destroy the mulitverse by killing the original universe." I hope they don't go in that direction.
Reviews for "Dragon Ball Multiverse 1"
bocodamondo responds:
i think that idea pretty fun and cool. but everyone and his own opinion ^^
Needs voices cause the sub is way 2 fast 4 slow readers and i know more about DBZ since it first came out and no its not kai it was before they remake for viewers but anyway needs voices
It's pretty good. The fighting animation looks nice; not exactly godlike or anything, but better than anything I could ever even hope to do. However, when the characters aren't fighting (standing and making idle animations, ect.) they look a little off. Another thing I'm not crazy about is a few of the backgrounds and scenery. The birds-eye view of the arena thing from the beginning is what caught my eye; it's sort of hard to tell what it is.
The story seems relatively solid, but the one thing you really need is voice acting! You don't have to be a ventriloquist to sound like Dragonball Z characters. I bet you could do it or find someone to help you out easily. I gave you a 3.5 out of 10, rounded up to a 4 in the vote. Just do some touch-ups on the animation and get some voice acting, and I can see you getting perfect scores.
bocodamondo responds:
allright. il see what i can do there, thanks
The main concern I had was the lack of spell check. Easiest fix.
bocodamondo responds:
go figure
As a DBM reader, I think you did really well, you should spell check your work tho and if possible find a way to add voices, even though hardcore fans would of course say "that sounds nothing like Goku!"... It was really dope, you should continue making these and maybe funimation might see the idea of DBM finally and possibly make a small series or something to please all Dragonball Fans.. #my opinion
bocodamondo responds:
i sure had a lot of voice acting request. yesterdat. i might add some in EP2