only 1 problem I noticed with the battles this time
-the move Toxic spikes dose not disappear after it poisons a Pokemon, the only way it's can be removed is if it's absorbed by a poison Pokemon or the move rapid spin or defog
that's the only problem I noticed, so the battle system is near perfected
the voices seemed to have improved and Jay's voice really fit his character. I see that Machop has evolved, in the simulator I presume. I would've liked to see him evolve though but that's just me.
so once again great work Teejay, it's not everyday I find someone who's dedicated to his/her series as much as this
... oh and i noticed you used my sprite as a trainer that went to Cinnibar island, thanks ^_^