The animation is great, and for the audience you're aiming for, it should be appealing. However, there is a lot of association with the whole fruit of knowledge & holy book - which I believe may deflate your message regarding knowledge. I immediately came away with the conclusion you're mirroring and playing on mythology found in the bible. Mind you the angelic or mythical being is an owl alien thing, which is pretty bad ass.
Adimanther kinda hit it on the head though, in terms of the banality.