4/5 8/10. This was beautiful. And the plot was self evident. Don't open your descriptions by self deprecating like that. You are a wonderful animator, and a fantastic artist. The premise of this whole video was very beautiful, and deserves the good rating you got.
I cannot criticize the art, or the animation, as it was done wonderfully, and sucked me right in. However a note to the songstress. She needs to use her diaphragm more, and hit those notes with more confidence, you are a good singer, use your voice baby. Its clear you have a harder time with the lower ranges, so sing in a slightly higher range. The higher notes were beautiful, but like I said, have for confidence when you belt them.