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Reviews for "Dear, Princess"

The animation was lovely, and the symbolism was great. The voice acting was slightly awkward, but I could tell it was due to lack of experience. (Keep at it!)

My only critique is the religious aspect of things -- To be honest, I had no idea you were trying to allude to Jesus Christ, and I preferred it that way. I feel the message comes along quite nicely, without having to bring in faith. By all means you're entitled to your religious beliefs, and I feel you did an amazing job bringing in that metaphor, I just would have rather not known that's what you were going for. I'm not even taking a star away for it.

exninja123 responds:

thanks a lot
glad you enjoyed it :)

oh love is enternal and all that crap bogus u tried to be the best and nicest person to this one cheerleader and what i got? a slap in the face.....

exninja123 responds:

oh that sucks....
maybe it wasn't meant to be :/

eh, not bad... the problem was really mainly in your narration, it was winded and yet somehow a little lazy. the story wasn't bad but the way you told it made it go on a lot longer than needed

exninja123 responds:

thanks for the critique! :)

I honestly loved it. The animation in the beginning was better than when she lookes more human (I guess? Haha). And I love the fact that's it's Christian based, which is pretty hard to make well known on the internet, with all the Atheists, and other religions. The voice actiong, I wasn't too psyched about. It was kinda choppy, and quiet. I had to adjust the sound a couple of times. But again, I absolutely loved it. I look forward to other videos of yours. âTM¥

exninja123 responds:

thank you! :D

You have a perfect voice for story-telling. However... (Sorry, this is a review, after all)

I think it would have been much better if it had stayed a "Black" theme as it was in the start. Work on your words of choice a bit, and maybe clear your voice up a bit. Its got the perfect tone for this sort of thing. Good Job :D

exninja123 responds:

wow, thank you! :)