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Reviews for "Dear, Princess"

Beautiful. I enjoyed it. Also if you could, i think you should put the music in the description. I am a a proud Roman Catholic and the way everything is put together (Like pain, Voice of Christ, and Love) is amazing. Keep it up

exninja123 responds:

thank you! :)

I DIDNT LIKE IT... SORRY BUT ALL WAS GOD UTIL YOU PUT THAT THING ABOUT RELIGION, IM ATHEIST AND I RESPECT OTHERS, BUT PLEASE, RELIGIOUS PEOPLE ARE ALL OVER THE PLACE, AND NOW IN THIS PAGE TOO? THIS PAGE IS FOR FUN NOT RELIGION...... IM TIRED OF HEARING ALL THE DAY "IN Revelation 2:2102883 ITS SAYS THAT YOU ARE GOING TO HELL", AND NOW I NEED GET ALL THAT STUFF IN HERE? WELL IN THE OTHER HAND THE STORY WAS AWESOME, AND THE DRAWS ARE WELL DONE, BUT PLEASE DONT MIX RELIGION WITH FUN AND ENTERTAINMENT....

exninja123 responds:

thank you for the review :)

This is beautiful. That is all.

exninja123 responds:

thank you :)

awwww super cute!!!!!!!!

exninja123 responds:

thanks! xD

This flash is well made. I did catch that there was something metaphorical going on about halfway through but didn't catch exactly what until I read the description afterward.

My problem with it is that the story pulls no punches at all. At a minimum it should have done something to reveal that "the prince" was Jesus at the end. As is, the list of things that are going to happen is pretty obvious from the moment you see the princess writing a letter, and absolutely nothing happens outside of the default course.

Without ANY particular event to trigger a particular response, the potential for an emotional response that the rest of the story builds up just never comes at all.

As a more minor nitpick, describing Jesus as physically attractive runs counter to the metaphor - following Him is generally not appealing on a superficial level.

exninja123 responds:

thank you for the review! :)
btw, when i said Jesus was "beautiful" i was refering to beauty beyond the phyiscal attractiveness.
and i agree with you on the following Jesus part, it's because Jesus is so great and we as humans are so messed up that following him will show our ugly nature
but i gotta say, the experience of it all is pretty beautiful :)