Overall nice, I agree with Zoran, you need a lot to work with, but I liked your style.
Now, im not religious, BUT I did get the message. I think is mostly because of my christian family, who knows. I did see The Prince as Jesus, mind you not at first. I started seeing it when the prince took her to his kingdom.
I think, that your problem, was not in the delivery of your message, but in not considering the kind of crowd you would deliver it to. Most people aren't too analytic of what they see, and just see what they want to see. So for your message to be understandable, you have to take that into account.
AND that is all.
KEEP IT UP!!!