Congratulations, It's not often that a good drama presents itself on Newgrounds. The storyline and imagery in this is wonderfully symbolic, and the music complements it fantastically. All I can think of that would make this improve is of you lip synched the "prince's" lips when his words were read. Although then there is the minor problems if it wasn't synched right. Doing so would have held the illusion a little more at those parts. You'll find no complaints from me however, and I repeat. It is very hard to find a good drama on Newgrounds, congratulations.
(Personal Note): Agnostic :D