There is something offensive about this submission, as well as the way you present yourself...
I mean for someone who "quit" newgrounds because he felt he was being "bullied", you certainly have taken to dishing out didactic criticism on other people's submissions. Often disregarding the technical merit of the submissions you've downvoted, purely because you didn't like the content.
Most of the content you've recently downvoted has been on the basis of it being a M.L.P. parody, and the use of "exaggerated faces", didn't you build up your fan base doing those silly pokemon movies with exaggerated mannerisms? (I spotted a some comical stylized facial features in this cartoon)
I may not understand the M.I.P. craze, but I would never leave such a low score towards something without taking into account the overall architecture of the submission.
You made a whiny bitchy post about how you were going to quit newgrounds because you felt you weren't being treated "fairly", and now some time later you're the one acting like a prick, you're the worst kind of hypocrite...
As for your submission:
- The animation was alright.
- Some of the drawings are sloppy within the context of what I think you were aiming for.
- The backgrounds range from decent to awkward.
- The length is somewhat short.
- The premise is uninspired, and execution dull.
- The audio is clear, and spot on.
I know "redfeather", and company ripped on you pretty hard, and that blows... However I can still respect those guys because they can take what they dish out without making some lame front page post about how they're being "mistreated" in negative reviews (those guys have enemies which have cost them awards).
If you want to come off as a decent dude don't treat people the way you wouldn't want to be treated, and learn to man up and take criticism that's valid seriously, and retarded reviews with a grain of salt. If you prefer to be an asshole that's fine too as long as you stop bitching, and acting like a victim when the inevitable recourse occurs.
Sincerely,
- Celx