lol made me laugh a little bit.
Reviews for "ThyExorbitant Ejaculation"
Wtf?
I really can't say that a "critique" is actually necessary. This is just vulgar and inappropriate with no actual creative intent to critique. I know that as the creator you will likely just disagree with any review that doesn't approve. If you really want advice for something, make something new from your own creativity, not just this kind of "Clock Crew" nonsense.