Following the guidelines you sent me on skype, I'll review this based on them.
so, these two hideous things see each other for 5 seconds, fall in love for absolutely no reason besides desperation cos they're two gross abominations, then they instantly decide the only way to be together is to harm themselves until they get their way, and then one of them dies, with no emotion because they had no character besides being 2 emos that act on impulse.
STORY OF YOUR LIFE, ENJOY YOUR MARRIAGE