The mystery of the disappearing jacket
I actually enjoyed this flash, even though I found the musical selection to be quite horrible. But this is just a matter of personal taste.
The drawings are pretty good here. You had some nice backgrounds as well as a very detailed main character. I didn't quite get why his jacket disappeared, but I love how you try to cover up this mistake by letting him say: "At least I got my jacket back". Kind of breaking the 4th wall here, but in a very good way.
I didn't like the blood stains after the guy got killed, that's definitely something you have to work on.
The last joke was pretty good. "Sorry man, we are out of business today. Come back later." I know this would annoy the hell out of me (pun intended ;) ) .
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