Story wise this is absolute gold. however the graphics were pretty poor, the audio loop wasn't that for Freigeist Real, I enjoyed Freigeist Drug song however. The game was short. a few bugs here and there. in terms of traps and puzzles not that many, if any.
I would play this game solely for the story, but beyond that this game holds not that much entertainment value for a lot of people, i would believe. Great job. maybe get someone to remake the game with better graphics and then try a resubmit. As for people complaining about controls, I can't see why. they were simple and smooth enough even when jumping and switching from platform to platform.
Overall this is a passable game. deserves front page. but i don't see it staying for long. Keep up the good work however