Reviews for Team Fortress School

[OptimisticOctopus]

Lotta potential

This isn't bad. I've definitely seen worse flashes. Obviously everyone's commented on the art, so I won't go there. My suggestion would be either to hire some voice actors or just use in game sounds. I mean, usually one guy doing 90% of the voices doesn't work unless you're a HIGHLY talented voice actor with lots of experience, or you're the creators of South Park.

And for the record, the writing is pretty good. Some of the visual jokes were funny (like the sudden shot of the demoman passed out on his desk), but some characters I think were a little OOC. I mean, when in doubt just remember that the vast majority of them are insane. The Soldier especially. He just seemed too functional.

Also, in regards to what someone said below, when in doubt: Just because something is MEANT to be annoying, doesn't mean it's any less pleasant to watch.

Twisted4000 responds:

Now THIS is the review that I've been looking for. It pretty much sums up everything perfectly, and even what I think of it, as well. I notice what I kinda did wrong, so hopefully I can use all of this for my next movie I'm making so I don't bore all of you.

[Catone]

Looking forward to a part 2...

At first, the idea didn't really sound all that appealing, until they started handing out assignments. I have to compliment you on your idea, and the story so far. Far as the drawing goes, it wasn't the best, but was good enough that it didn't hurt the flash or make my eyes bleed. Room for improvement, but a satisfactory base.
The best suggestion I can give, for all the people crying about "bad animation" and "bad voice actors"... I didn't have a problem with the voice actors so I can't help there well maybe drop the volume on the princapal just a little, far as the animation, it won't be a problem if you have enough story to make up for it. After watching this, I have to think you are perfectly capable of doing that. Can't please everybody, and some only laugh at bowel movements and jokes refering to genitalia... please do not sink to that level for a few morons. Keep up the good work.

Twisted4000 responds:

Thanks, but I'm not sure if I'll go onto part 2, though, it's probably a good thing that I ran out of room for the entire movie so I could at least get feedback of people telling me that they didn't really like it so I don't need to waste even more of my time to finish it.

Thanks for the positive feedback, though.

[AleksandrtheGreat]

Very.... Subpar?

I'm going to be blunt with you, I was not a fan of this flash. Unlike some people however, I will actually go into detail on what i liked and didn't like. The animation was not very good but not terrible. It, along with the art itself, was very sloppy and basic. The voice acting was a hit and a miss. The principal's (or whatever he was) voice was absolutely HORRIBLE and the person who voiced the characters with accents sounded like he couldn't decide if he was actually going to do an accent or not. The actual quality of sound wasn't very good and I disliked how you arbitrarily used actual audio from the game and your own. However, I thought that the narrator, engineer, and soldier did a decent job compared to the others. Now on the subject of humor, I was not really impressed. I found few of the jokes like the Pyro teaching an English class "amusing" but that's about it. It may have been in part due to the strange concept of the flash itself, which in my opinion could have been handled a bit better.

Twisted4000 responds:

Well thanks for at least going into detail. I voiced most of them, yes, the principal included, but at least I voiced some characters you thought were good, such as the narrator and the Soldier. I guess my voice acting skills ARE hit-and-miss...

One time I made a Flash with TF2 characters and such, and everyone whined about how the characters' voices were NOT provided from the game, but instead from other people. But now I get someone saying that he DOESN'T like how some voices are from the game. I guess you really just can't please everyone, I suppose.

Regarding the weird principal guy, though, his voice was supposed to be incredibly annoying... I can't exactly tell if everyone hated his voice because it was poorly-acted or if it WAS annoying.

[UnsraW]

Pretty good

The art wasn't really... amazing, buuut... it suited the overall theme for your animation, so it worked out great

The voiceacting was kinda cool, maybe need to record it slightly better next time

Other than that, awesome vid (:

[insane250]

Loved the Idea overall

But overall bad animation, bad voice acting and it failed at making me laugh. The concept was good though