Syntrus - Lab Test.
First Impression "What the hell is the time signature of that synth", It's so damn surprising, leaving some extra points in the originality.
This really isn't my best genre to review, but I'll try anyways.
First thing, Samples, Samples, Samples.
You need some better samples.
The pads/synthstrings is in my opinion far too sharp, and needs to be filtered if you're to use that samle.
Just set the high pass at a filter to 0 (at FX), then reduce some of the low pass so it won't be as sharp, but don't put it too low as that will give a muddy-bass sound.
Second, I'm not a fan of 8/4 hi-hat, offbeat clap and 4/4 kicks. It's just plainly too boring in my opinion, try experimenting with some other rhythms as well. You might want to add some more bass to that bassdrum using a parametric EQ (I take it you use FL).
There really weren't much change in this song, which could either make it a nice backing track, or a lesser front track. (Such as listening etc).
Well, I can be harsh some times, but I hope you don't get offended in any way as I'm merely trying to give constructive critiscm.
Best of Wishes, Chris. (Arbiter)
Ps; I got a tune for the MAC6 August.
Wouldn't mind a review :)