I see that you were working to a deadline and that
However, while the flash showcases your talent and establishes your animation as a qualified and atmospheric horror, your demo doesnt do the episode justice.
Rather I am left contemplating is there really such a point, it's too short to give a substantial impact on the watcher and anyone who even widens their eyes as a result of this flashes plot probably is scared of movies like paranormal activity.
Which is an insult. Though back to the flash- I dont want to look further into the nightmare because of fear of spoiling the overall product which I am actually looking forward to with bated breath. No, this flash doesnt portray the horror that it should, but it certainly portrays the potential. Thus you get half marks now for an unfinished piece- but you WILL get full marks when the rest is provided. I withhold my rating till then, best of luck fabs! Scare the crap out of us!