To say the least, this is rather chilly. I suppose in this day and age, something that doesn't resort to quick screamers, and actually puts effort into truly unsettling and disturbing visuals is to be applauded. I made it through it rather fine, no actual problems, though I still compliment you, since public opinion is that "I'm not sleeping tonight...". Perhaps I myself am insane. Regardless, good work. Cinematography was alright, but hey, it's flash. Perhaps something a bit more blunt would work better. Not to be hypocritical and go to screamers, but something a bit more...sharp, might help this a bit. It's too ambient, too faint.
No matter what I say, you've put quite a bit of effort into this. I'd say you might want to brush up on some other horror videos. It's all dark and gloomy, more an unsettling vision than a peek into a traumatized and broken mind. I have faith this could be great. Until then, I'll keep an eye out for the finished project. Cheers.
-the guy with the really stupid username