I liked it!
I thought it was Creative. You have my full Vote :D
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Reviews for "Vegeta vs shadow part 2"
Could use some work, but it has potential.
That's just the way I feel, I can't exactly give advice since i never made a sprite video before. But grammar wise I've seen plenty of mistakes on that area through-out the video. You should probably use a dictionary next time you write things out :P
Not bad.
With a title like Super Sonic Bros. Z, I was ready to blast this for being a SMBZ ripoff, but it turned out okay. Your story is far from original but that doesn't mean it can't get better. Just PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD DO NOT USE MECHA-SONIC AS THE VILLIAN. That would be copying SMBZ too much (not to mention a crap-load of other losers that have used him only because of SMBZ).
As far as the flash, The animation was good. I like the battle between Sonic and Knuckles because it wasn't too painfully DBZ-ish. Some of the character's text was to hard to read. Try adding a drop shadow to the text, that will help a lot.
Points Off for the Title
Never use a title similar to another persons' work. It draws attention to people who think this is the next episode of Super Smash Bros. Z. Even if you are a large fan of this flash by Alvin Earthworm, you can not do this. Your sprite animations are good, but the seconds in between sentences were a bit long. Keep at it and you will do well, but next time, do not make your title remotely similar to another persons work.
not so good
well let's begin:
Animation: it was ok i guess but most of the times it was messy and i could see the white BG also i didn't understood why you moved the text all the time it made it even more annoying to read....
about the battle it was too slow paced sonic hit knuckles knuckles talks and hit sonic
just boring and short
overall: 4/10
Story: just stupid and it had no originality into it 1/10
Music: pretty good and it add to the atmosphere 7/10
directing: well it was boring like the story there wasn't enough use of the v-cam and when there was it wasn't good 2/10
overall i give you: 3.5/10
better luck next time