I commend your effort.
Children certainly do need families and everyone needs love. It just lacks polish and your grammar needs work too.
Reviews for "Give Someone Alone a Home"
so touching
what is this salty liquid running of my eye :)
jackbliss responds:
Dunno but it could mean you have a very big heart. Thanks for the perfect review :)
Aww...
5/5 10/10 .... I really don't get into things like that but ... that was really nice
jackbliss responds:
Thanks for the review and perfect score :)
That was touching
I really don't care about how it is drawn, but I really do care of what you put into it. It was very touching. Most kids needs a family today to care about them.
jackbliss responds:
Not most kids, ALL kids need a family! Thanks for the heartfelt review.
OMG!!!1!11
I'm adopting a child RIGHT NOW!
jackbliss responds:
Good for you and thanks for the review!! :D