Freeeeeaaaakyyy
So freaky. I loved it!
Freeeeeaaaakyyy
So freaky. I loved it!
Here's what I think...
+The art style wasn't half bad, nothing I can really complain about.
+The idea was a solid one, creepy premise and everything.
- The narration was rather weak, in both tone and delivery. The narrator was reading with a rhyming scheme when no rhyming words were present. This seems to be more along the lines of free-verse and not rhyme poetry (if its even poetry.)
- You need a better voice actor/ your voice actor needs more practice
this is not scary
it`s everyone rated and nothing even happens
Meh...
although it's a well written scheme, and has rather tasteful artistic style to it, i didn't enjoy the voice it was told in. Nevertheless i'm looking forward to more.
this...
now THIS..
is horror..
love the narration
and loved the plotline!
i love you too Dx!