Though the drawings are actually really good, something about the lack of lighting and the simplicity of the colors make this Flash look extremely outdated. The music and sound effects are also a little too loud and high-pitched.
Onto the animation itself, the voice acting was great and I especially loved the accents, but I didn't like the story or dialogue at all and couldn't really tell what the point was. In fact, it just seemed like some cliche soap opera bullshit. To make matters worse, the tweens you used were absolutely awful. Peoples' capes should drag as they walk.
All in all this is pretty good in terms of graphics, but the story just... Makes no sense.