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Reviews for "Story Time :D"

Cute! It was good but...

As far as I know, the American version of this at least (I'm not sure where you're from) you missed the part where the first 2 pigs just wanted to build there houses quick and the last pig took the time to make his out of brick, hence making the moral something along the lines of "if you take the time to put effort into something, the rewards are well worth it!". You basically just mentioned what they built their houses out of, but not why.

That aside though (and even with it missing) this is still very enjoyable and fun! I love the clean lines and smooth animations, the Sepia Tone and music giving it an old timey film style, yet adding a slightly new age twist with the movements and details. I like the idea of a virtual pop up book, but instead of the pictures popping up, they are moving instead. I hope you'll make more of these as they are adorable, and hell, a fun way to show your kids an old classic. Very well done sir!

marsonNG responds:

Yeah the morals of the story aren't very clear in this because we were meant to just animate the basic story and so I guess I didn't Put much effort into the actual telling of the story. any way thanks 4 a good review.

auto page-turn function

turning all theses pages is annoying, i am trying to eat here.

marsonNG responds:

Yeah that's prty much impossible, since there's no way to automatically tell when a persons finished reading.

Kudos to you

The animation was brilliant. Everything ran smoothly, and the art style was charming. The music fit perfectly with the story, which was well told. I believe this was based off the original story of the "Three Little Pigs", right? I mean, that's where you would get the whole "wolf drowning in a pot of water" thing.

marsonNG responds:

Yep kinda, it was based off a mixture of the old story and the more modern story's.
TY for the review.

man kids stories are scary.

I mean, they got eaten alive! at least the F'king alien crushes your scull first with his mouth thing before eating your ass.

now I'm going to have nightmares!!!

on a more mature note, this was maybe the best book style flash i've seen on NG. most are just static shots, i liked it.

for next time:
a little more pizass, black and sepia look timeless... which is a funny way of saying really old.

It was great :)

I thoroughly enjoyed that. Your animation is very smooth and I hope to see more from you.