Nice animation, confusing directing.
What I enjoy about this video is the animation. The loose, almost unfinished look the dream has reminds me of those old animated short films MTV used to air all the time. And I mean that in a good way.
My only criticism would be the direction. I feel it's difficult to keep track of the scene and the characters in the space much of the time. You may have done this on purpose to make the dream seem more otherworldly, but I think it does a greater disservice to your animation.
Overall, the pacing is frantic and exciting and made the movie a real joy to watch. I certainly hope to see more from you in the future.