Reviews for "Alight"

very beutifull

I see this as a short story of where we came from. The elements of earth, fire, and water. To rise above ruin and chaos and become human. The transition from something inanimate to a being imbued with a soul.

i loved how quickly you managed to use indirect charactirization and introduce us to these two lovable opposites so quickly! and as always i do love a good bit of symbolism, so excelent work, youve earned every half of a star!

I'm crying...

simply astounding