dare I say it?
yes, this is better than girl chan in paradise.
WAY BETTER in fact. So much more time and effort was put into this and it shows. The actions have better poses, and the characters look better. A lot of the humor was just in the visuals, if I couldn't understand english, I'd still really enjoy this. The animation was smooth too. The jokes were really funny too. This is fantastic.
Best of all, this was a production you made yourself. It has your voices, your work, your everything. It should be a fantastic feeling for you. Congratulations on completing this masterpiece. I hope you continue making stuff.