Incredibly good!
It was stunning and I don't really care about the lagging. It's still worth 10 stars =D
You have amazing drawing skills, plus the story is creepy -and I like creepy stories ;) I had the chills when I saw the monster... but I liked it more when it had glowing eyes. do you know the forest god from mononoke hime? or the kaonashi from spirited away? those are one of the most creepiest things I've ever seen in my life... maybe you should take a look at them ;)