I'm not Christian, but
Gotta be careful with that ending, especially on how you threw the word 'bible boy'. Even as an Atheist, I feel a little sorry for the guy preaching the May 21 2011 thing.
Also, the look at the acoustics of your voices... The quality makes it sound like the guys are talking inside a room, really close to me. The movie shows them outside in the wide open. It feels a little weird listening to this.