Sorry dude...
The artwork isn't too bad, I mean at least there's shading. The voice quality isn't too bad. But there's many things wrong with this. It's still enjoyable by a certain degree, but I just wanted to point it out. First of all, have you noticed there's a slight popping sound here and there? That usually comes from the mic, so no offense to the voice actor, but can you check on what you record more often? Second, why was there a white border on occasions? Seriously dude, you didn't even bother to check to see if some of the animation FITS? Good God man, that really ruins the animation. Speaking of which, the animation is pretty decent, but the detail was way too solid. The characters were fine, but the detail looks out of place compared to the characters. Oh yeah, and there's a small glitch. Sometimes, when I press play, for some reason, it cuts to the last half immediately. I don't know about you, but people really hate being spoiled on what's going on without knowing what went on in the beginning, although that only happened the third time I viewed this, so I really don't know if this happens on the first try. But, at least you admit that you rushed in the end, which explains why my expectations were not as great as they were supposed to be.
... Yeah, I give the SAME critique to almost EVERY review I give, but seriously man, it's obvious that more than just the ending was rushed. Dude, take your time!